JMac96's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chain Reaction]

not bad

[Super Furio and Monsters]

where do I start, I know you mean well to make a platformer game but there were a few problems, the audio of the jumps could of been quieter than the background music because it gave me a bit of a headache, the character movement was a little bit too fast for me because you cant properly land where you would want to land and some more little tweaks you can do with the game. but all in fairness, its alright for one of your first games but you can be a bit more original than parodying a huge and successful game franchise. 3 stars because I know what its like to submit something with unexpecting results of the fact you have got 2 stars on this piece, you should of gotten 3 by my observations. hope this helps

[School Run]

not too bad. I can see you took inspiration from riddle school which took inspiration from picos school and this actually inspires me to make my own game like this of my school. congrats

[Hunky Punky]

if you get the dot on the cursor when its not moving, you can just leave the mouse there indefinitely and you would still get a good score. I got to over 5000 simply by doing this. I would suggest you can move the dot with wasd or arrow keys. that might make it better with probably a better drawn tv or another stage

mustafaaskin responds:

Thank u very much i will improve it with new stages and new obstacles. I will consider wasd or arrow keys, but have to improve it for mobile with new obstacles. HP II will be polished with same hero.

[Reach The Goal]

that's cool. I dunno why people don't like this game so much except for level 30 which was a bitch to get through but it shows your understanding of how well you know coding on your game. now you can focus on your levels and character/ enemy designs for your next game more easily because now you already have your code you can just transfer it. oh and also it may be better if when you think you have completed your game you show it on the newgrounds forums so that people online here can tell you what is good about it or not instead of your game being determined whether if good or not by a shitty vote or not. just suggesting

ZomgGamez responds:

Thanks. And I might take your suggestion.

[Seb's Adventure!]

not too bad, I mean when someone makes a game. it would be preferable to have simplistic controls and music which a few games here dont already have. its a platformer game with a simple story not too over the top and it shows you know how to make the controls of your game and that's cool. now you know your controls, you can focus on better designs for your levels and character art maybe but there is something I don't really like about it. even though its creative, I don't really like how dark it gets at times coz half the time I tried to see where I was, I couldn't see much and it hurt my eyes a bit. just next time you make another game, just think of the little things to help improve your game. hope this review helps

[Casual Dominoes]

its a good, fully functionly, working game but its missing that "thing" to make it a game on newgrounds and not something I can find on my ready-installed games on my computer, like solitaire, backgammon. I mean the idea is good but monotonous, its slightly boring and repetitious. you can add twists to your game to make it stand out and unique from all others make games here. you can maybe add explosion effects or something when a domino is set or when a domino is set, the whole screen rotates 90 degrees around with flashing lights everywhere or put in a timer so you have to react fast and the timer decreases every turn by 2-5 seconds with the most addicting music in the whole wide world. you can even instead of just battling with the CPU, you can even add differing characters with difficulties after each round and you can win and lose money after each round. these are just a few ideas when thinking how you can improve on your future games and also here's a tip, when thinking about ideas, stay up really late and I mean really really late so you get tonnes of ideas flowing or find tonnes of inspiration and jot down literally anything that comes to mind and boom! you got yourself ideas that wouldn't make any possible sense, add some of those notes and when placed together to create something unbelievably random, exciting and addicting. you can use the rest on some other projects you happen to think about coz im guessing your far from just finishing up on making games. if you do that then im more than certain you will get a bigger audience to play your games here on the best website in the entire universe!!!!! hope this has helped and im so tired so this comment may be interpreted as mad and insane for the human brain to handle and thanks for the game.

[Human sim prototype]

its alright but interaction NEEDS to be in your finished game or else im just staring into moving text. looks cool though. maybe you can become inspired by all the games in the subsection simulation-job and hopefully youll gain from that and make a 2d world in your game maybe