JMac96's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Press X to win]

easiest game ever

[Pencil Wars]

the graphics dont feel that good. maybe a better walk cycle when holding left or right could be an idea. you could make the platforms in a way that it feels fluid when walking upwards. the AI for the enemies arent that great. you can jump over them and they wont turn back. maybe you could make a simple test for each little bits and bobs your not that happy with. always show people in the newgrounds forums little beta tests to make sure people like what you are doing and people will often tell you things you can improve on and help you. getting help should be easier when your showing people on the forums as the beta tests or anything you put up there cant ever be erased therefore it cant get blammed by bad voting as there isnt any voting involved in the forums. when you and the small community you build up over time are all happy with your game then you upload it for more people to see and boost your quality. hope this helps a lot as this advice im giving to you comes from half a year of experience. 3 stars to be fair. i know how it feels to have shitty reviews if you get any and they would put someone down with large potential. congrats!

DIWAKAR responds:

Thanx my Friend

[New 3d Metro Simulator]

what significant changes have you done to improve the game? there was another version of this game yesterday and this is the exact same so i wouldnt call it new but just a copy

[3D Metro simulator 77]

there are a few things i dont like with this game. the fact that the tracks repetitiously just go straight forward and theres not as much detail as there could be on the buldings as you go outside for a brief amount of seconds but i really liked it

[Infiltrating the Airship]

a game where you try to fail for the medals and the humour! epic

PuffballsUnited responds:

Yep :)

[zaggary]

if you took your time with this game it may be great but this isnt worth much as a form of entertainment but it shows you can show how to make buttons to different locations in the timeline (assuming you work on flash). but seriously, that is literally all you need. just better animation and this could be much better. hope this helps

[Monster Doctor]

its alright i guess. solid attempt

[Stick Torture Game]

its amusing. i can tell you that

[Hangman]

could of used more challenging levels

[hop and bop parkour fixed]

its alright but you may need to adjust the height of some platforms as they were a bit too high for me to jump towards. when you fall, i know it puts you into the score screen but it could be better by putting a retry button at the screen instead of having to press f5 for the game to reset but i think its cool! you have potential to make great games!!

philipv11 responds:

thx jmac96 it a bug some do so it fast when you fail but you can do refresh the page